He sees a girl he likes.
He wants to own her heart,
or body, really —
It’s all there in his mind.
The steps, the dance, the conquest
(well, ideally)
But that’s not how it works.
His model is too static:
When two people are there,
Variance is quite dramatic,
And it’s dehumanizing, seeing
Others as mere things,
When love’s about connecting.
Yes — connecting —
He sees a girl he wants.
And if she sees a boy,
that she wants, too,
Then that’s the way it works.
If not, there’s really nothing he
should even try
to do
So nice to read. You have talent
so wayhigh touchy
absolutely perfect.
I have read it more than 10 times and cannot get over it..
Its beautiful
By the way
https://savouringlucidity.wordpress.com/2020/05/02/cart-of-delightful-memories/#more-112
It’s my new poem based on an incomplete love story and how two lovers meet and gets diverted forever…
Do take out some time to check