He sees a girl he likes.
He wants to own her heart,
or body, really —
It’s all there in his mind.
The steps, the dance, the conquest
(well, ideally)
But that’s not how it works.
His model is too static:
When two people are there,
Variance is quite dramatic,
And it’s dehumanizing, seeing
Others as mere things,
When love’s about connecting.
Yes — connecting —
He sees a girl he wants.
And if she sees a boy,
that she wants, too,
Then that’s the way it works.
If not, there’s really nothing he
should even try
to do
So nice to read. You have talent
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so wayhigh touchy
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absolutely perfect.
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I have read it more than 10 times and cannot get over it..
Its beautiful
By the way
https://savouringlucidity.wordpress.com/2020/05/02/cart-of-delightful-memories/#more-112
It’s my new poem based on an incomplete love story and how two lovers meet and gets diverted forever…
Do take out some time to check
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