Among the pines we walked; we were in love –
The sun was streaming through the boughs above –
Our hands were clasped together by our sides
Out in the place where happiness resides
And even breathing did intoxicate
Us, stopping constantly, to share a kiss;
The moments between moments seemed so great –
The shining sun looked down on all of this
Just peeking through the pines to see us there –
Two soon-doomed lovers, as he knew we were:
So thoughtlessly we wandered, me and her,
Two lovers in the morning forest air
And though, this sonnet now, I may enshrine:
He pines the most, who lives but to repine
(“The Pines” – 7-21-2015)

And he shall no longer pine….
I like the way you use the traditional form, especially the clever stress shifting on ‘pine’ in the last two lines. You would have been a credit to the court of Elizabeth 1st 😉
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Really nice 🙂