31 thoughts on “Old Poem, Written Age 16

    1. I like yours… it captures the age better.

      I edit these pretty thoroughly when I reprint them, except for the occasional one I label “unedited”. Those read like English was maybe a third language for me.

  1. thevillagewords

    That’s my favourite picture in all your posts! It reminds me of someone!

      1. Soumya Somani

        Thank you so much!! Your appreciation means a lot to me😃😃

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  3. Fabulous!! I love it! I love my old poems too. My daughter (14) just wrote a poem/song about her first romance/heartbreak. I told her, one day, honey, you will read or sing this and it will take you right back to this moment. Writing can mark the moments of our lives so we can revisit them. Thanks for sharing your moment!!

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