snow silent fell,
her hand was cold,
we breathed in our endeavor;
i took her past
her last restraint
and on towards forever
the shadow could
not break the light,
nor split apart the day
snow silent white,
as hearts grew cold,
and we both lost
our way

Nice one!
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