Once
A woman and her husband
Stopped at this place
She, eight months with child
He, thinking about walking out
And the drive had been a tense one
Old wounds reopened
Fresh hurts on display
And an old couple was there
At the same time
Laughing while they pumped gas
They asked her when the baby was due
She said, “One month.”
The old man asked her husband
“Are you excited?”
“Nervous,” was the reply
“Don’t be. Just remember:
Loving someone
Who loves you back
Is the greatest thing in the world.
And your child
Will love you back.”
Forty-eight years later
The woman is no longer young
She stands at this abandoned place
Her young granddaughter in tow.
“What is this place?” the little girl asks
This place?
This is where your grandaddy and I
Decided to stay in love
(“Filling Station” – 8-15-2014)
This made my heart smile. Love, love, love it!
Very moving!
perfection, brought tears to my eyes <3
xx Paris
Thank you, I can’t tell you how much that means to me.
I’m totally agreeing with you. I started off loving the photo.. ended up at that last 2 lines and my eyes were all like.. “too many tears, can’t read…”
Dude! Hit me in the feels why don’t you???
Make it three sets of watery eyes! This is FABULOUS
Thanks, Annie B — Abandoned places have so many stories in them…
So very true. I absolutely love to imagine the stories behind them. We always take the back roads on trips for that very reason.
Too good
Very nice: poetry plus photo = eloquence both verbal and visual. I have seen gas stations like that.
This is moving and beautiful
Oh wow I really loved this so much!
Thank you!
This gets better the more I read it!