[I edited this pretty heavily, but tried to leave the original emotions intact. – Owen]
It’s lonely on the beach tonight,
Just me and one lone bird;
The love I thought would never leave
Has left without a word
The waves still sing their lullaby,
But I just cannot rest;
It’s hard to think you’re good
When someone else is always best
I see the lights far down the shore
The party’s over there;
I don’t belong, I never did,
But I don’t really care
I left my shoes back in the car
So I could feel the waves;
I wish, like some adventure book,
I could explore some caves
Or go back in my mind to when
I still could be a hero,
But life is no adventure book
And I am just a zero
A nobody, in no one’s tale;
That all is past my reach —
I’m just a lonely traveler
Who’s meant to prowl the beach
I wish that I could build a world
Out of my fantasy;
It’s strange I wish she was still here,
Though she does not want me
I guess I’d better get on back,
I’ve walked for mile on mile;
And I have got to be at work
In just a little while
I need some caffeine pretty quick
So I seem on the ball;
And go through all the motions
That I’m anyone
At all
This is great. Been there, done that, felt the same! How about posting the original to compare?
Thanks.
I have done that with a couple of these old poems, but this one is more or less unprintable.
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I relate to this piece. I think most can, for our whole lives are just as that young man, you, walking along that lonely beach. In fact, I just kicked my shoes off…again. 🙂
Ha! Every word is me. So damn relatable! Thanks for sharing 😀 I’d love to see the original… hehe 😉