i asked the tangled ones to say
why their lives had turned out this way;
they laughed at my misguided “why”
then spread their wings and turned to fly
but all they did was stand apace
and scan the township hard and long;
the tangled ones, still held in place
by threads so fine, but still
too strong
This is really beautiful. Really amazing .Your writing style is elegant.
Oh this was beautiful. The last 2 lines especially were so striking.