Owen – I’ve read this twice. Wonderful writing! But I am totally missing the “brilliant” aspect. I’ve gone over the break-up storyline, the one-sided conversation, the juxtaposition between the beginning and the ending. You are obviously seeing something that I am not! I’d appreciate it if you would send me a bit of enlightenment. Thank you! 🙂
Owen – I’ve read this twice. Wonderful writing! But I am totally missing the “brilliant” aspect. I’ve gone over the break-up storyline, the one-sided conversation, the juxtaposition between the beginning and the ending. You are obviously seeing something that I am not! I’d appreciate it if you would send me a bit of enlightenment. Thank you! 🙂
What I liked about the piece was the gradual shifts from one emotional extreme to another, but “Brilliance,” I suppose, is subjective.
Okay – thank you so much! It was driving me crazy! I’m not sure what I was expecting, but I had to check. Always learning …