My Second Haiku I shaved my moustache Left my beard like a Spring goat Now I look Amish To share is human:TweetShare on TumblrMoreEmailPocketPrintLike this:Like Loading... Related Published by Beleaguered Servant Owen "Beleaguered" Servant (a/k/a Sibelius Russell) writes poetry mostly, with an occasional pause to have a seizure. View all posts by Beleaguered Servant
That was my shoving a season in there to make it Haikuier, but you are of course correct. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
I really wish you would continue to write Haiku…after you are more comfortable with 5-7-5, you should try 3-5-3… LikeLiked by 1 person
Hahaha! :p
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Second line has one too many syllables, my friend, but keep it up!
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That was my shoving a season in there to make it Haikuier, but you are of course correct.
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I really wish you would continue to write Haiku…after you are more comfortable with 5-7-5, you should try 3-5-3…
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Thanks. I have done over 80 5-3-5’s, which I know (and tag) as “Lunes”.
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