My Second Haiku

I haven’t really got the hang of this, I don’t think.

I shaved my moustache
Left my beard like a Spring goat
Now I look Amish

Author: Beleaguered Servant

Owen "Beleaguered" Servant (a/k/a Sibelius Russell) writes poetry mostly, with an occasional pause to have a seizure. View all posts by Beleaguered Servant

6 thoughts on “My Second Haiku”

Lisa says:

20150513 at 09:53

Hahaha! :p

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cmrsyk1985 says:

20150514 at 21:49

Second line has one too many syllables, my friend, but keep it up!

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1. Owen, the Beleaguered Servant says:
  
  20150514 at 22:03
  
  That was my shoving a season in there to make it Haikuier, but you are of course correct.
  
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  1. cmrsyk1985 says:
    
    20150515 at 09:24
    
    I really wish you would continue to write Haiku…after you are more comfortable with 5-7-5, you should try 3-5-3…
    
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  2. Owen, the Beleaguered Servant says:
    
    20150515 at 09:26
    
    Thanks. I have done over 80 5-3-5’s, which I know (and tag) as “Lunes”.
    
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