My Second Haiku On 2015051320150614 By Beleaguered ServantIn Original Poems I shaved my moustache Left my beard like a Spring goat Now I look Amish To share is human:TweetShare on TumblrMoreEmailPocketRedditPrintLike this:Like Loading...
Second line has one too many syllables, my friend, but keep it up! Loading... 20150514 at 21:49 Reply
That was my shoving a season in there to make it Haikuier, but you are of course correct. Loading... 20150514 at 22:03 Reply
I really wish you would continue to write Haiku…after you are more comfortable with 5-7-5, you should try 3-5-3… Loading... 20150515 at 09:24
Hahaha! :p
Second line has one too many syllables, my friend, but keep it up!
That was my shoving a season in there to make it Haikuier, but you are of course correct.
I really wish you would continue to write Haiku…after you are more comfortable with 5-7-5, you should try 3-5-3…
Thanks. I have done over 80 5-3-5’s, which I know (and tag) as “Lunes”.
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